Hi, submitting my interior showcase for review. Its a basic shop and living area. I realise my naming format is incorrect as i intended to make a PC showcase, but was advised to start with the furn_de_p.
Interior cell name: PC_selengor_showcase
Thanks to whomever reviews this.
| Attachment | Size | Date |
|---|---|---|
 PC_Selengor_Showcase.ESP | 8.62 KB | 2019-06-22 19:04 |
2017-10-08 01:57
1 week 3 days ago
Welcome to the TR forums! An interior reviewer will take a look at your showcase in the next couple of days. Until then, feel free to hang out with us on our Discord server: https://discordapp.com/invite/9T6TtNU
2019-06-22 18:58
8 months 10 hours ago
Thanks Jani!
2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
I'll review this soon!
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2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
Northmarker: Yes
Lighting: Default (Bad) (look at other Hlaalu interiors and copy the same lighting values)
Illegal to Sleep: Good
Path Grid: No
- misc_de_goblet_01 (Back middle goblet on the end shelf is floating on one side, needs rotation altered a little bit more
- chest_small_01_ingred10 (on top of the same shelf as the goblets, needs rotation editied to go with the bendiness of the shelf)
- ingred_scrib_jelly_01 (on top floor)
None
- Same Lantern everywhere. Mix it up with different Candles on main floor
- Same candles everywhere on top floor
- bk_lustyargonianmaid (remove this, this is not a common book)
- Bed needs a pillow (make sure to bleed it into the bed a little)
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And your spirits so low
2019-06-22 18:58
8 months 10 hours ago
Thank you! I'll get to work.
2019-06-22 18:58
8 months 10 hours ago
FIxed the floaters, done some rotations, and bled in the items you mentioned. Added pathgrids, lighting, and more detail. Also removed the exterior model. Thank you for your review pointers.
2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
- sc_paper plain (one witout the ingredient)
- misc_de_goblet_01 (X2)(the one on the ends of the group of goblets on far shelf (First right golbet, last left goblet))
- light_de_lantern_02-177 (doesn't follow the curve on top of the dresser)
- light_de_lantern_04_177 (add a rope to go through it then lower it)
- in_hlaalu_room_corner (on top bedroom floor isn't gridsnapped, gridsnapping to bedroom pieces will also need top floor door and entrance room to gridsnap too)
- Too many candles everywhere. What I was meaning in last review was delete the old candles when putting new ones in, for variety. This many light sources so close to each toher is going to cause lighting issues due to Morrowinds limit on light sources in one area. I would ditch the lanterns on the shelves
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And your spirits so low
2019-06-22 18:58
8 months 10 hours ago
Bit of a long time since i last worked on this. Hopefully i addressed all your points.
2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
Reviewing again
NOTE: This is made for ex_hlaalu_b_07 exterior mesh
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2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
- sc_paper plain on shelf behind crates (so is bread because of this)
- ingred_bread_01 (on the left) is positioned weirdly. It should be weighing down the paper under it
- Misc_DE_glass_green_01 (on the desk on top floor)
- misc_de_goblet_01 (on shelf, one in the front. Needs to be rotated to face a little downwards to the right to follow the shape of the shelf)
- Misc_Inkwell (on the desk on top floor. Needs to be rotated, not bled to stop floating)
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And your spirits so low
2019-06-22 18:58
8 months 10 hours ago
Fixd bleeders and floaters, added more clutter.
2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
- Chitin spears are floating
- Tipped over sack on the shelf is at a bit of a weird position, wold rotate downwards more to sit naturally into the other sacks
- Tipped over basket's handle is bleeding into the barrel next to it
- The salt rice that is on top of the other one is at a strange position, might be better to set it down normally like the other one, maybe on some paper in the blank space next to it
- I would say raise the wooden stakes that the ingredients are hanging off of. It is a different wood to the shelf and so bleeding them into the shelf's wall connnection looks a little strange.
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And your spirits so low
2019-06-22 18:58
8 months 10 hours ago
Made the adjustments, i'm 99.8% sure i got the chitin spears flat, i will be happy to never work with those shelves again if i can help it.
2016-01-25 21:01
1 hour 5 min ago
everything looks good
promoting yo now!
congrat-u-lations11111
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And your spirits so low