i3-200-Ind

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i3-200-Ind

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Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i3-200-Ind (#736)
Faction: Indoril
Parent claim: TR_3-16-Ind (#120)
Claimed by: carlthepimp
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Location: 1:(2700, -3812):0
Files: TR_i3-200-Ind_Ludovic_1.esp; TR_i3-200.esp

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A small mansion, inhabited by a young potter couple. Their workshop is in the ground floor, their living quarters are in the basement. Use asylum's pottery statics! : http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/hermitesf/western_gate_V3.jpg
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Review:
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I. TESAME: Dirty. Clean out everything that you modified in some way. Leave ony your cell and any new containters or objects YOU and only YOU made, and theres alot of stuff that isnt. According to what i see, i think you should leave only your cell. If you dont have TESAME, please get it, you need it before any claim gets passed.

II. Loading: No troubles in CS or in gameplay.

III. General: This is missing a Northarrow (NorthMarker), which is needed to indicate the players direction inside the int. No eveidence of gridsnap, but it doesnt seem noticeable.

IV: Main:
i. Bottom Floor:
-N'Gasta'Kavis bleeds into the other book it is resting uopn.
-Please remove N'Gasta, the person living here is not a necromancer.
-Some of the limeware and such sinks partially into the same shelf. Please remove decimal points, that makes it less likely for any object to bleed or sink.
-In another case, the pitcher is bleeding into the table.

ii. Top Floor:
-The small table (stool thingy) is de_p, make it de_r.
-The buying game sinks.
-Potters ledger floats.
-Rolled paper floats on desk.

V. CONCLUSION: This interior needs some work lore-wise. Everything else seems to be in order.

FINAL RATING: 7/10.
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Post by Lud »

fixed by me:
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Approving.
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