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i3-117-Ind

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Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i3-117-Ind (#608)
Faction: Indoril
Parent claim: TR_3-16-Ind (#120)
Claimed by: presh
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Location: 1:(2874, -3927):0
Files: i3-117-Ind.rar

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Almalexia, Velothril Avenue (21,-30)
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Post by Lady Nerevar »

Hospial
TESAME:clean

bottom floor, storege room
-broom whithout bucket bleeds into the wall minimaly. negligable
-first broom in bucket bleeds into the wall a little. negligable

lower floor, food room(right next too storege)
-alot of spoons bleed into each other. as do teh knifes and forks. do we rely need so many utensils? i think this number

could be cut in half. 20 speeons seems a little much(pluss it looks crapy on the tray--way crouded). IMHO
-ALL the goblets float. i also think the number og goblets can be reduced, by 25% maybe...
-the trays are static, which doesent make much sense if they are to be delive to the patience. i sugest replacing them

whith the misc tray(misc_com_redware_platter)
-the small wood borwls float. i mean both staked and unstaked
-the jusgs on the same table float, either compleatly or partialy
-hound meat bleeds into the plater
-the dager floats on one side

Lower floor, temple
-2 bones in the middle of the altar float
-the candles infront of the shrines float
-36 Lessons of Vivec, Sermon 34 floats partialy, as does Homilies of Blessed Almalexia next to it.


Lower floor, bedroom 1(the one under the second floor)
-quil pen should rest on inkwell
-Lives of the Saints floats partialy
-goblet floats
-lying goblet rests ilogicly

Lower floor, bedroom 2
-staked papers float atop each other. each of the uper 2 papers needs to be lowerd to the one beneath it

Second floor, bedroom
-goblets on the night stand of the red bed float, as does the potion

Second floor,Waiting room (small room after bedroom)
-key floats
-tey floats on one side
-the goblet thats not on the tray bleeds into the table

Second floor,entery (room whith bar)
-staked paper floats. the top parer needs to be lowerd
-10 gold bleeds into the plate

third floor, first bedroom (right after stair)
-Misc_Potion_Cheap_01 floats partialy. in adition, this potion is not to be used since it doesent have a name, and is

mising an item. pluss it has no evects. i have no idea why beth put it in miscs anyways...remove or replace the potion
-on the same sidetable, the candle partialy floats
-inkwell floats
-common shirt floats. the redware on this table also floats partialy

third floor, second bedroom
-bargain restore strenght(the one farther away from the bed) floats partialy
-plate floats. teh fork on the plate is not resting logicly

ofer all:
-even thought this int has quite a few errors, its quality is still aperent. i give it a 8.5(10 after changes are made)
-after fixing, this should definatly be included.
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I'll give this a review.
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TESAME: Dirty

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Cell is named badly

Starting upstairs:
- active_de_p_bed_12 bleeds into furn_de_rug_big_06
- p_restore_health_b floats
- misc_com_metal_goblet_02 bleeds into the small table
- TR_bk_HealersTale floats on one end
- misc_com_metal_plate_05 floats
- The fork floats and the knife bleeds into the plate
- common_skirt_03 floats on one end
- The inkwell floats
- The redwarepota float
- Delete Misc_Potion_Cheap_01. No icon, no effects, no etc.

Ground floor:
- Furn_shrine_Tribunal_cure_01 bleeds into the ground
- The two light_de_candle_16_64 float
- Gold_010 and Gold_005 bleed through the bowl
- Furn_De_Bar_05 bleeds into the ground, as is lower than the other bar pieces. It is the wrong piece anyway. Use furn_de_bar_02
- Misc_Inkwell floats
- Both light_de_lamp_03_77 bleed into the ground too much
- furn_de_p_bench_03 bleeds into furn_de_rug_big_04
- bk_LivesOfTheSaints floats
- light_de_lamp_05_128 floats and bleeds into the wall
- Much of the furniture bleeds into the rugs
- misc_com_metal_goblet_02 bleeds into the table
- misc_com_metal_goblet_01 floats
- light_de_candle_blue_01_64 floats
- common_shirt_03 floats
- light_de_lamp_05_128 flaots (in potion room)
- Many potions float, or appear to. Bleed them into the shelves slightly
- There is a missing desk (I'm guessing)
- chest_small_02_gems face the wrong way. They also float / appear to
- ingred_crab_meat_01 bleeds through the plate

Bottom floor:
- A lot of floating on the tables in the kitchen (?)
- All that cutlery on the tray looks bad IMO. Delete most of it
- misc_com_broom_01 bleeds into the wall
- misc_com_broom_01 bleeds into the crate
- furn_de_lecturn bleeds into Furn_de_rug_big_01 in the prayer room
- furn_de_p_bookshelf_01 bleeds into the floor
- Many of the books on the shelf float / bleed
- Many of the light_de_candle_ivory_01_64 float
- Furn_shrine_Nerevar_cure_01, Furn_shrine_Rilm_cure_01 and Furn_shrine_Olms_cure_01 float
- Two bones float in the ashpit (it sucks there isn't an Indoril ashpit)
- light_de_candle_17_64 bleeds into the table
- de_r_drawers_01_mcloth floats
- furn_planter_01 bleeds into the drawers
- chest_small_02_gold_50 faces the wrong way
- Furn_de_rug_big_08 bleeds into a lot of the furniture
- light_de_candle_blue_01_64 bleeds into the table
- misc_de_bowl_redware_01 needs to be bled into the table slightly
- Furn_de_rug_big_03 bleeds into the furniture in the room behind the stairs
- furn_de_r_table_07 floats in the bedroom furthest from the stairs
- light_de_candle_green_01_64 bleeds into the table
- The top two papers in the stack float
- Furn_de_rug_big_08 bleeds into furniture
- de_r_chest_01_fcloth2 faces the wrong way

Comments This interior is great. :) A lot of floaters and bleeders hold it back though

Rating 8 / 10
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TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Top Floor (Bedroom)-

misc_uni_pillow_01 floats
common_skirt_03 floats
misc_de_pot_redware_04 bleeds
TR_bk_HealersTale bleeds slightly
misc_com_metal_plate_05 floats
p_restore_health_b bleeds
p_restore_strength_b bleeds
misc_com_metal_goblet_02 bleeds
furn_de_r_wallscreen_02 bleeds
misc_uni_pillow_01 bleeds

Next floor down-

bk_LivesOfTheSaints floats
sc_paper plain floats
That stack of two paper the one on top flaots
light_de_lamp_03_77 bleeds
Everything on the little plate bleeds.
Furn_shrine_Tribunal_cure_01 bleeds
a lot of the potions are floating.
Remove the urns
The two stack of misc_de_foldedcloth00 the top one floats
misc_com_metal_plate_04 floats
ingred_daedras_heart_01 bleeds
chest_small_02_gems bleeds
Both chest_small_02_gems are turned backwards.
misc_beaker_01 float
misc_uni_pillow_01 bleeds
misc_com_metal_goblet_02 bleeds
bk_LivesOfTheSaints floats
misc_com_metal_goblet_01 floats
common_shirt_03 bleeds
light_de_candle_blue_01_64 floats

Bottom Floor-

sc_paper plain floats
misc_de_goblet_02 floats
Misc_Inkwell bleeds
misc_uni_pillow_01 bleeds
de_r_chest_01_fcloth2 flaots and is backwards
The three stack of sc_paper float
light_de_candle_green_01_64 bleeds
bookskill_restoration2 bleeds
furn_de_r_chair_03 bleeds
furn_de_r_table_08 bleeds
ingred_ash_yam_01 bleeds into bowl
chest_small_02_gold_50 is backwards
furn_planter_01 bleeds
light_de_candle_17_64 bleeds
furn_de_p_bookshelf_01 bleeds
bk_LivesOfTheSaints bleeds into the book below it
furn_de_lecturn bleeds
in_velothi_ashpit_01 bleeds
WARNING! Silverware overkill!
About 1/2 of your goblets bleed
Misc_Com_Wood_Bowl_01 floats
misc_com_redware_platter flaots
ingred_hound_meat_01 bleeds
food_kwama_egg_01 bleeds
Once again, urns need to go
ingred_eyeball bleeds
ingred_belladonna_01 bleeds
ingred_corkbulb_root_01 bleeds
ingred_bloat_01 bleeds





Comments Whew...thats a big one. Really nice but a lot of bleeders/floaters.

Rating 8.5
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Post by Lady Nerevar »

now i have to many reviews again.... :(

*sigh, stupid list needs fixing...*
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Post by Nomadic1 »

No, just cut mine out and send back the other two reviews. Easy solution :)
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Post by Lud »

These to be fixed.
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Post by Gez »

Alright. Deleted all the sporks and knoons that were piled on top of others. Replaced the Mysterious Invisible Ethereal Desk by a normal one. Replaced the urns by indoril "culdems." Replaced the grahl eyeball by a cephalopod shell -- I figured it would be easier to get that from the Telvanni than to get a grahl eyeball from the Skaal.

And overall, fixed all the stuff mentionned in the three reviews. So I hereby say that this int has been
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Final version:
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

Presh claimed this interior. It had been approved. If a similar claim is made at a later date this file should be used.
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