q2-28-Imp

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Post by arvisrend »

Dialogue fixed by LadyN's suggestions. Most of the edits were added commas (you have far too few of them, zobator) and removed "though"'s (of which there were too many).
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Post by Haplo »

Whenever you complete a final review and are ready to approve the quest, arvisrend, please add that final file to the top of the thread instead of in the post. (From what I gather you haven't had a final file yet, so it's not an issue, just a heads up)
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Ah, right. I think Why should do the finalling though, just because someone else should have a look at it.
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Post by arvisrend »

Merged into the Mainland, approved with minor fixes:

17:06:55 Why: Why actually search for the culprit when there is always a Dunmer to blame? -> when you can set up a Dunmer as your scapegoat?
17:06:59 Why: that's really all I'd change
17:07:10 arvisrend: wow, thanks
17:07:21 arvisrend: so other than that, the q2-28 dialogue is fine?
17:07:25 Why: yup
17:09:37 arvisrend|mainland: "when there is a Dunmer to scapegoat" might even be more succinct
17:09:54 Why: good

Thanks, Zobator, for this claim: a good job.
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