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SobernRus Interior showcase

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Hello !

I am French, and i'm showcasing this Hlaalu interior , based on the ex_hlaalu_b_06 model.
The cell name is "SobernRus_Showcase", i'm not sure if an exterior was requested for this showcase but I made it anyways in Balmora near the river.


I already made a few dungeons for fun with Skyrim creation kit ( basic stuff no scripting).

I mixed a few styles with containers (basket, sacks, barrels and crates.
Ilegal to sleep here is ticked, north marker set and cleaned(I am not sure if I was supposed to delete the textures).
And it fits the exterior.
I also use Morrowind overhaul while playing and I do not know if it has any effect on the mods.

Thanks.

:)
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Welcome to TR, I gave your int a quick peek and I really like it. Here are few errors I found:

com_sack_01_chpfood5 is bleeding into furn_de_r_wallscreen_01
sack next to it is not resting properly on the wall
bk_realbarenziah3 is bleeding into wall
light_de_lamp_06_128 is floating

You need to watch out for bleeders and floaters.
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Post by SobernRus317 »

Thanks, i'll wait until I get more criticism to update the file.

Everything you mentionned is fixed.
I noticed bleeding with light_de_lamp_05_128 with furn_de_rug_big_04 and with the books.

Also, would you say that the way I placed the tapestrys are bleeding ?
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In some cases yes (wooden part of wall is bleeding through tapestry) but otherwise I would call it creative use of tapestry.
btw things with pointy bottom should bleed a little to ground. (misc_de_bowl_white_01)
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Post by SobernRus317 »

Here is the seconde version, I made sure that everything is correctly placed.
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Well I didn't saw any errors so I would recommend you for promotion but lets wait for real reviewer.
BTW name your ints something like TR_InteriorName, its easier to find.
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- bk_realbarenziah3 not leaning against wall
- furn_de_p_chair_02 resting on floor but bleeding into the furn_de_rug_big_09; please place your furniture either entirely on the floor or entirely on the rug
- misc_com_plate_03 on table needs some fine adjustment to be placed correctly
- both com_sack_01_chpfood5 and com_sack_03_chpfood5 need to be sunk into the floor just a bit more; the same applies when you stack sacks upon each other, you should still bleed them into each other and into the surface a bit
- bk_ConsolationOfprayer needs to sit either straight up or lean on the book next to it; the present arrangement is a bit unlikely, even if physics in Morrowind don't really exist
- com_sack_02_ingred should bleed into the floor a bit more
- most of your bottles in the wine rack are slightly floating
- silverware only in rich (and usually Imperial) interiors, otherwise wooden utensils
- rotate the small chest on the shelf so that the missing bottom doesn't show
- please raise your sunlight settings
- papers float above desk; to fix this, please 'f' your papers until they bleed, then raise them by altering their Z value by as many 0,01 points as needed so they don't bleed anymore (also, stacking papers is usually a bad idea, as you can see if you look closer)

One small remark: interior modders don't link their interiors to exteriors, this is done at a later stage.
With all that said, I must add that this is a nice interior. Your rotating skills are adequate. Once you fix the errors I listed I'll recommend you for promotion.
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Post by SobernRus317 »

Thanks !

I fixed everything and renamed the cell to "TR_SobernRus_Showcase".

I hope that I didn't miss anything on the bottles. :)

And also, by "misc_com_plate_03 on table needs some fine adjustment to be placed correctly " did you mean to place it somewhere else on the table or just rotate it to fit the shape of the table ?
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The second one, though I can't blame you for asking, the sentence turned out rather awkward. :D
You did a good job, I only found a barrel_02_cheapfood5 bleeding slightly into the wall. I won't hold it against you since I didn't point it out in my last review. Another thing I failed to do is answer your question regarding the textures: you are supposed to delete anything that you haven't created yourself when cleaning your file in TESAME. For interior modders, that means anything besides the cells and any other object you have created yourself (and labeled properly), which means that the textures have to go.
Your file isn't technically clean, but that's entirely my fault for not pointing it out earlier.
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Okay, well thank you ! :D
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I am a little hesitant on deleting textures with TESAME; if I recall correctly, once you merge a file with cleaned-out ground textures, the merged file has problems with all textures of that/those types being missing, or there are error messages at the very least. arvisrend might be able to speak a little more on that matter.
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Wow, a very nice interior indeed. Lots of clutter, nothing out of place, and everything was really well rotated. Nice job.

I'm going to go ahead and also recommend you for promotion. Excellent job :) Member recommended for promotion!
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Congratulations, Sobern. You've been Promoted for interior modding. Welcome to the team! If you have any further questions, feel free to ask them here. Stryker is our Head of Interiors; you will be working with her in your modding at TR.
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Heyyy congratulations, Sobern ^^ Welcome to the team :)
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Félicitations!
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Merci !
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Bero wrote:I would recommend you for promotion but lets wait for real reviewer.
Hold on there chief! You are a real reviewer. You don't have to have the title to make any kind of recommendation in here. If you were promoted for interiors, please use your judgment and recommend away!
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