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I, for one, liked it very much. Don't think it needs to be toned down at all.
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Revoked. This claim shall remain so until another brave adventurer attempts to defeat it.
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I really liked what Andres did to it, I'll try to finish it, if it pleases you.
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A worthy contender steps up to the plate!
... The crowd watches anxiously as he works his magic on the floral beast.


Granting. :P
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Updated.
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Almost there...
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Done!
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TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Bleeders – Too numerous to list. Rotated, moved or scaled plants to eliminate bleeding into walls, or other plants.

Overlap
flora_ivy can NOT be overlapped with other flora_ivy. The system has a glitch and this causes some of the leaves to “blinkâ€Â￾ off and on as you walk around looking at the ivy. I removed the offending ivy listed below.

Other Issues
The basic exterior wall structure was ok – but the piers were at the wrong angles. To bisect the walls properly they had to be at 22.5 degrees off of the walls. These angles have been corrected. Also placement was fixed so that the walls did not bleed through the pier, near the bottom.
The second set of piers were also removed. I didn't see a real purpose for them.

Items Added
TR_furn_com_rope_02 – for lantern
flora_bc_vine_06 – for lantern
flora_bc_vine_07 – for lantern
TR_Flora_Bluefoot_03 – to cover small ground bleed into log
TR_terrain_grassplane – added a couple of these to cover small gaps in the original grassplanes.


Items Removed
Flora_BM_shrub_01 (4325, 4394, 13636) – below ground level
flora_ivy_01 (4147, 4382, 14118) – overlapping other ivy
flora_ivy_02 (3534, 4127, 14048) – overlapping other ivy
flora_ivy_02 (3860, 4111, 14356)– overlapping other ivy
flora_ivy_02 (3940, 4354, 13813)– overlapping other ivy
flora_ivy_02 (4141, 4361, 14223) – overlapping other ivy
flora_ivy_02 (4147, 4357, 13994) – overlapping other ivy
flora_ivy_02 (4154, 4154, 13978) – overlapping other ivy
flora_tree_ai_01 (6712, 4873, 13914) – Outside building
flora_tree_ai_03 (7442, 4161, 14988) – Outside building
TR_ex_ind_ground01 (3328, 4160, 13568) – not needed
TR_ex_ind_ground01 (4352, 4160, 13568) – not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (2432, 5376, 14688) – not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (2448, 4368, 14688)– not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (3280, 6320, 14688)– not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (3392, 3520, 14688)– not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (4288, 6336, 14688)– not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (4400, 3536, 14688)– not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (5232, 5488, 14688)– not needed
TR_ex_ind_pier_02 (5248, 4480, 14688)– not needed


Corrected file below.

Comments First of all – well done to those who worked on this. I know this took a lot of effort to complete. I loved the design/layout. I was quite impressed with most of the plant placement - the TR_flora_ovarytree looks very good. It feels like a real garden. Good job.

Concerns:
1) Lanterns stuck into trees - I don't think the curator of this place would have allowed that - so I added either vines or rope to provide a means of hanging the lanterns.

2) Not sure the lanterns are really needed - it is quite bright in here. This would be a great place for scripted lights that change brightness for day/night time. This place would be cool at night too.

3) I personally think that there are too many large trees. In reality, they would block too much of the sun light.

4)Even though the place looks good - I think that the plant layout should have been different - so as to keep plants from similar geographical areas together. Plants from BM/cold climates are mixed with BC/tropical plants, cave dwelling mushrooms are near sunlight loving flowers. Looks good - just not logical.




Rating 9 out of 10
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Moving to N/A until we decide what to do with Alma claims.
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