i3-139-Ind

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Sat May 14, 2005 8:16 pm

Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i3-139-Ind (#630)
Faction: Indoril
Parent claim: TR_3-6-Ind (#110)
Claimed by: Serric
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Location: 1:(3621, -2908):0
Files: TR_i3-139-Ind_Lady Nerevar_1.esp; TR_i3-139-Ind_Resadyn_1.rar; TR_i3-139-Ind_Serric_1.esp; TR_i3-139-Ind_Thrignar Fraxix_1.esp

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Isolated mines.

Xui'al · Post by **Xui'al** » Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:15 pm

I love to do mines. Tell me somemore and I will think about doing, once my Map1 detailing interiors are done.

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Wed Nov 30, 2005 5:30 pm

Sounds fun. Is there a SS showing the enterance? This will be an ex-kwama hive, but the imperials(Or whatever its close to) took it over after finding raw glass. There will still be a hidden little kwama group in the back. What kind of rock should i use?

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Sun Dec 04, 2005 2:53 am

Not meaning to be rude, but anytime now hermit.

Hermit · Post by **Hermit** » Mon Dec 05, 2005 1:00 pm

Sorry, uni's keeping me tied down. No offense meant, Resadyn. :)

Granted and happy modding. :)
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http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/files/oot/TR_EoT.esm (112.6 KB)

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Mon Dec 05, 2005 4:06 pm

Totally ok.

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:01 am

Done.

Massalinie · Post by **Massalinie** » Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:10 am

submitting to review

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:13 am

Wow massey, that was fast.

Sload · Post by **Sload** » Mon Jan 02, 2006 4:37 am

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes

Northmarker set: No
Loading errors: No

Review: -Remove the eggs. This is clearly a glass mine, not an eggmine.
-Barrels by the entrance float badly, and the pickaxe ones are obviously duplicates.
-The small pool of water's big rock..you can swim under it. Remove it or add rocks under it that make it so that you can't swim under it.
-Way too much glass for stealing
-Needs a LOT LOT of detailing

Comments This needs a lot of detail before it will be ready, and these errors need to be fixed.

Rating

Nomadic1 · Post by **Nomadic1** » Sat Jan 14, 2006 10:30 pm

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes

Northmarker set: No
Loading errors: No

Review: There is no northmarker. Bug the interior people to obtain an exterior screenshot to align the northmarker with.

- ex_cave_door_01 isn't in doorframe properly
- The barrels float
- The pickxes need more rotated variation
- The handles of both the pickaxes float on the bed
- The handle of torch floats. The flame doesn't look right when laid down also
- There is no way for the miners to reach their beds (they're miners, not mages)
- The pieces of track do not align
- The PC can quite easily see up under in_mud_rock_26 and rock_glass_05
- A drip sound would work better than a wind sound in that pool
- in_mud_rock_26 doesn't reach the ground (next room)
- The sconces are out of place, and look shit. Replace all of them with tiktorches
- There isn't a way for the PC to get out of the water
- in_mud_rock_26 doesn't stack well
- Flora_kelp_03 grows out of the rock
- Flora_kelp_03 bleeds into the ground greatly
- kollop_01 floats. Also, as this is not a grotto, there should be no kollops here. Therefore delete them
- Flora_kelp_03 floats
- There is more floating kelp in the next room, and more kollops to delete
- Delete all of the colony lights (BM specific)
- The wind sound is underwater. A drip sound would be more appropriate
- in_mud_rock_24 doesn't go through the ground
- The eggsacks float. Also, I thought this was a glass mine? The last passage is too small to support a kwama colony at any rate, so delete the eggsacks

Comments This is a very plain cave. It is not well lit. Add some tiktorches to light the mine. This cave also suffers from a lack of consistancy, with three things that can be harvested (glass, eggs and kollops). Just keep it as glass. It is also not very detailed.

Rating 3.5 / 10

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:45 pm

please fix this since you can see the reviews. if you dont feel like fixing this, i cna revoke.

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:53 pm

Ok, I was waiting for this to be sent back to the claimed, but I'll fix it now.

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Sun Jan 15, 2006 6:01 pm

just fix your cliaims as soon as it gets 2 reviews. i have no idea when ill have time to send stuff back again.

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Mon Jan 16, 2006 6:23 am

Resadyn · Post by **Resadyn** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:26 pm

Waht would you suggest I add in here to detail? This was my first cave claim and i'm a little sketchy about waht to add.

Nomadic1 · Post by **Nomadic1** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:43 pm

Rocks are always easy to add. Bittercoast vines are used a lot, and Bethesda used upside down Grazeland trees once or twice to look like roots. Cavern beams are a must in mines, and you can rarely have too many.

Massalinie · Post by **Massalinie** » Sun Feb 19, 2006 7:17 pm

Bump for Resadyn: please fix this

Stalker · Post by **Stalker** » Sun Mar 05, 2006 4:25 pm

Bump.

kapuhy · Post by **kapuhy** » Sat May 13, 2006 3:18 pm

Criticals:
-VERY underdetailed.
-Besides in_moldcave_** interior pieces, almost everything needs realigning or floater/bleeder check.
Lots of technicals. Claim progress is about 40%, really (in terms of amount of work needed to finish).

Clean:Yes;

Fits exterior:IMPORTANT: Accurate map is not accurate in this place, there are 3 doors (two velothi and one cave), neither is marked correctly on AM (not to mention one is missed at all).
As for this int, however, it will fix exterior more or less, if you turn NorthMarker correctly (but then I've assumed that Ancestral Tomb to the left, which hasn't even its claim number, is small one).

Northmarker set:Yes, but points west instead of north.

Loading errors:None;

Lighting:Correct;

NPCs:N/A

Logic:
-As Nomadic wrote before: three things (kollops,eggs and glass) to be harvested in one place - it's not logical;

Lore:None;

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Recommendation/Comments:Not much I can tell about this cave, it's very unfinished. Lots of technical errors (floaters/bleeders), very underdetailed. It's like half-way done only. Since Resadyn claimed this, and now he knows the stuff better then when he has done that, I reccommend to give it back to him for fixing. If he has no time for fixing it, then revoke.

Overall Rating:3/10;

Lud · Post by **Lud** » Sat May 13, 2006 7:21 pm

Revoking-Resadyn is gone and this has too many issues to be fixed in review.

kapuhy · Post by **kapuhy** » Sat May 13, 2006 7:24 pm

Some mod could also change the description, these mines aren't so isolated. In fact they hardly fit between ancestral tomb and the road to nearby village

Lud · Post by **Lud** » Sat May 13, 2006 7:35 pm

Best to leave it as is, I say. They are about 10 cells form any major settlement.

kapuhy · Post by **kapuhy** » Wed May 17, 2006 2:41 pm

They're 7 cells from Almalexia. If Almalexia isn't a major settlement, what is?

Also, I wouldn't call the mine which door can be seen from nearby Indoril palace, and where you can probably still hear swearing of workers in nearby shipyard, "isolated".

Anyway, it's a minor issue.

Serric · Post by **Serric** » Thu May 18, 2006 12:50 pm

I'll have a go at this...what sort of mine should this be? iron, glass or egg? I'll do this in mold tileset, and i'll make it small-medium sized.

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Thu May 18, 2006 7:27 pm

make it what ever you want (i would personaly go for iron)

granting!
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http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/files/oot/TR_OOT_Main.esm (1.7 MB)

Serric · Post by **Serric** » Tue May 23, 2006 12:20 pm

Any chance of an exterior shot?

kapuhy · Post by **kapuhy** » Tue May 23, 2006 2:50 pm

Here it is. Watch out, this place is narrow with tombs on both sides, I strongly advice you to see this in editor for yourself.

EDIT: Stupid me, I wrote Ashlander Tomb when I meant Ancestral Tomb, of course. Pardon my sclerosis...

Serric · Post by **Serric** » Tue May 23, 2006 3:28 pm

Thanks kapuhy, your a star...

now i've got the cell i will have a look

Serric · Post by **Serric** » Fri May 26, 2006 9:31 pm

Just a quick update; i've done the main layout, keeping it small and making it an iron mine. I've done the largest of the caves, just got a quite small one to do and then a general place for the miners to store/rest/whatever. Should be done in a week or two...depends on my exams.

Serric · Post by **Serric** » Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:04 pm

I must say that you're timings perfect mass...just finished this today. I'm really sorry about the lack of updates, my exams and work have been so hectic i forgot to update this, though i was working on it. Just been going through all my reviews first, else this would have been done earlier.
Again, sorry...

Massalinie · Post by **Massalinie** » Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:33 pm

Alrighty, that's quite alright. I was just trying to make sure that people hadn't forgotten about their old claims. Good work.

Submitting to review

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Wed Feb 07, 2007 8:12 pm

fixed some floaters. my brain is kind of shutting off rightnow (probably since i havent done anything with it today) so i may have missed stuff.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:02 pm

Approving, use top my for merging